Question Can anyone give me advice on my content?

[Fleuret]

I dont wanna be a faggot and self promo on here so I'll just say this, dont feel the need to sub or anything i am posting this purely for advice, Ill also embed so yall dont have to click any links and ill put it further down.
Anyways was hoping for some advice. I am reading off a script here mostly but occasionally I go off script. I know the quality of my camera is dogshit but I cant do much since im broke. Anyways do you guys have any tips for speaking, editing etc?

 

[Rapist]

I dont wanna be a faggot and self promo on here so I'll just say this, dont feel the need to sub or anything i am posting this purely for advice, Ill also embed so yall dont have to click any links and ill put it further down.
Anyways was hoping for some advice. I am reading off a script here mostly but occasionally I go off script. I know the quality of my camera is dogshit but I cant do much since im broke. Anyways do you guys have any tips for speaking, editing etc?

Good content just talk a bit more energetic or buy a better mic if you the funds

 

[Novelzil]

I dont wanna be a faggot and self promo on here so I'll just say this, dont feel the need to sub or anything i am posting this purely for advice, Ill also embed so yall dont have to click any links and ill put it further down.
Anyways was hoping for some advice. I am reading off a script here mostly but occasionally I go off script. I know the quality of my camera is dogshit but I cant do much since im broke. Anyways do you guys have any tips for speaking, editing etc?

Think I saw the promo on TikTok will check out